Pic source: http://lucidquest.com/gfx/gallery/desktop/I feel you in my mind,
The soft tenderness of your presence,
The fragrance in your enchanting voice,
Whispers filled with sweet nothings,
My heart buzzes with expectations,
Anticipating the next silky smooth move,
I can still feel you, touch you but not see you,
One day you make me what I am,
The next you try to destroy,
A meaningless entity,
Denial does not kill you,
Only makes you stronger,
Caught in the eternal battle,
Of the mind and heart you suffer,
Hidden in the forbidden corner of my heart,
You will rise again and again till I die,
My love…sweet forbidden love
The soft tenderness of your presence,
The fragrance in your enchanting voice,
Whispers filled with sweet nothings,
My heart buzzes with expectations,
Anticipating the next silky smooth move,
I can still feel you, touch you but not see you,
One day you make me what I am,
The next you try to destroy,
A meaningless entity,
Denial does not kill you,
Only makes you stronger,
Caught in the eternal battle,
Of the mind and heart you suffer,
Hidden in the forbidden corner of my heart,
You will rise again and again till I die,
My love…sweet forbidden love
20 comments:
kavidhai kavidhai.....really superb one....pinnadi eppavachum thevai patta eduthu use pannikalam illa robbie :)..copyright issues edhachum iruka enna :)
The fragrance in your enchanting voice
Scent and sound in a single line. ^_^ Witty, I must say. Also loved the line:
Anticipating the next silky smooth move
Very sensual. *grin*
Dude Nadal ended Federer's dream ;)
hehe looks like Roger is no match for nadal on clay complete dominance ;)
hehe
Ganesh,
I pity your ignorance, Federer has a problem against Nadals forehand topspin against his backhand. If you watched this match closely, Federer kind of slunk into an unforced error mode from the second set onwards. If he had maintained his first set prowess Nadal would have been easy meat for him. It was rather unfortunate that Federers form slumped. It was clear that the heat had got to him by then, Nadal ofcourse is better of the two on clay but I wouldnt dismiss Federer from winning the French next year or the years after that. After all Federer was the underdog going into this tournament. People even predicted that he would crash out in the opening round. It seems right now that the only puzzle that Federer has to solve is playing Nadals top spinning forehands and backhands. Nadal has a certain advantage being a lefty as well. It would be interesting to see how far Nadal proceeds in wimbledon or US opens. He has to perform well in other grandslams for me to call him a better player than Federer. If Nadal rules on clay federer rules on everthing else.
Hey Bharani,
you can have the copy right use it only once though :P (and let me know about the results for sure)
Soulless:
Thanks for visiting and leaving your thoughts about my poems. I consider such poems spontaneous gibberish:P well its true there wasnt much thought put into incorporating those exact words. Thanks for appreciating though.
nice poem!!!!
Nice poem :-)! So what (or who) exactly is the sweet forbidden love :-P?
hey shuba:
Thanks, glad you liked it
hey arch:
since you asked this question I have to make this confession. This poem was inspired by the movie fanaa, I was watching this movie and suddenly the turn of events in the movie made me write this. A blind woman falls in love and the guy leaves her after promising her the world. When he returns she can see him but she cannot recognize him. This forms the base of forbidden love... watch the movie if you get time and then read the poem, it might get clearer.
Hmm, I got such negative reviews for the movie from anyone who saw it, that I have lost whatever little interest I had in watching it :-)! I will have to take your poem at face value then!
Hey Robbie: That was a great one!
Nice composition and good post I would say. It had a lot of information.
very good poem..but the contents are not so true...
What a great lyric. I liked your entire blog bcause this is attractive.
Federer kind of slunk into an unforced error mode from the second set onwards.
This is very cool as far I read through the whole one.This was really subjective one.
Looks like Roger is no match for nadal on clay complete dominance...
Very cute . Keep it up .
I don't normally understand these kinds of poems, but you have a great style of writing and i really appreciate you man.
scientifically this is very good writing with all of its contents.This is too innovative.
Your story is amazing sir. I think im going to take a day off and stay in the house reading your entire blog.
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