Sunday, July 24, 2005

She leaves me breathless...

picture courtesy http://www.crownpoint.com/
The clock just struck 12
I tiptoed out of my room Into hers...
There she lay like an aphrodite
waiting for my arrival
I swooped her into my arms
and placed a kiss on her lips,
She swayed and gasped
I couldn't stop kissing,
I saw her crimson frame in the darkness
Her face radiated a brilliant blue
I saw her eyes closed, arms outstretched
A picture of beauty
as she lay on the bed
I took her lips into mine,
My neurons fired a salvo...
I gasped in relief,
Fell into her arms,
We left our past in the passion,
Will our lives get salvation?

13 comments:

Ganesh said...

passion ignited the neurons sending waves of ecstasy exploding inside his cranium :)

ioiio said...

Unga veettu naaikku lips'la ellaaam kiss adippeengalaaa :)

ROBBIE said...

ioiio:
lol, eppothikku adhu nadakkala, nadandha thaniya ungalukku mattum post pannaren.

ROBBIE said...

ganesh:
I can replace "my neurons fired a salvo" with what you have written here :P

Sowmya said...

:)
Sowmya

Raman said...

Hmm ... Robbie, does this poem have a hidden agenda of wooing an anonymous member of your vast audience?

So, there's a romantic buried deep within you! Nadathu Raaja Nadathu ...

ROBBIE said...

raman:
no such thing like wooing anyone, I thought twice before I decided to publish it, for these very reasons hahaha! hmm but what is life without controversy:P

Phil Plasma said...

life without controversy is a little too rosy for most of us. I don't strive for controversy, however, I strive for obfuscation.

Arvind said...

Robbie,

With immediate effect, your site has been rated as 'R' (pun intended).

Raman,
Why only anonymous commenters :P ?

sen said...

Looks like a st forward one for me.Or is there an anology in this??.

how about these titles for it
1)A New day.
2)Happiness and Sin
3)Adam and Eve

ROBBIE said...

Arvind:
I dont mind the R rating, its all in the mind.

Senthil:
It is a pretty straight forward one, a figment of my imagination thats all. As usual you can use your imagination after all a poem is no more personal once it is out in the open. I did not intend to put this on the web but I just decided to in the spur of the moment. These are very special thoughts I had been holding to for a long time. I think letting them out will certainly help me.

Swahilya said...

The moments of togetherness, actually give a glimpse of what it means to have salvation!

Prabz said...

ahem.. yaaro edho sonnamadiri oru nyabagam.. :)
Kalakal kavidhai :D