pic courtesy http://www.searchforlight.orgI can’t get enough of it I thought,
Will I get another day?
Another minute, another second,
Just looking at her beautiful face,
Sadness dwelled in her laughter,
Lines that remain from days of sorrow,
Does she realize that I am admiring her?
Maybe...but it doesn’t matter.
It’s this moment that everyone wants,
A moment to relish the rest of our lives,
When a song about stars made her smile,
It doesn’t take much effort to smile does it?
Will I get another day?
Another minute, another second,
Just looking at her beautiful face,
Sadness dwelled in her laughter,
Lines that remain from days of sorrow,
Does she realize that I am admiring her?
Maybe...but it doesn’t matter.
It’s this moment that everyone wants,
A moment to relish the rest of our lives,
When a song about stars made her smile,
It doesn’t take much effort to smile does it?
6 comments:
"...Sadness dwelled in her laughter.." ?? Thats an interesting mix of emotions. But why is she sad ?
This poem gave me a warm fuzzy feeling, usually UR poem go over my head U see. Sweet. :)
Zaps..nice poem.
Some feelings can be express some cannot be, but sometime shyness or fear of rejection can also keep one from expressing it, perhaps thats why she is sad ?
Robbie,
you have become the master of abstract poetry :P
keep it up dude
Robbie: A space scientist once said, "When I gaze at the stars I wonder, if the stars are gazing at me." It is actually true. You Look At the Universe and the Universe looks at you. It is One without the Other.
Post a Comment